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DISCLAIMER: I do not own any of the characters. "The Magnificent Seven" belong to MGM and Trilogy Entertainment. I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again, I’d be a happy woman if Vin belonged to me.....but no such luck. I have not made any profit out of writing this, so please don’t sue me. It would not be worth your while.

AUTHOR NOTE:
1. This is a stand alone story. It has been written in response to the Vin Fan Fic and Discussion Group Anniversary Week (July 2008) Celebration "Finish the Story challenge which had a 1500 word limit.

2. I have no medical knowledge and know little about military and security organizations, so there are likely to be inaccuracies. I invite you to enjoy my story for what it is... a rumble about six hunks and one drop dead gorgeous, handsome, strong, cute guy - you pick which of the seven fits that description! (g)

3.This story is a fantasy! If you are looking for a realistic story that is based on facts, this is not it. I have made everything up.

4. I am not a professional writer - I'm just someone who loves the boys. My beta readers are volunteers who have willingly given their time to help me and I will always be in their debt. Any errors are mine alone. There are a number of spelling, grammar and punctuation differences between Australia and the USA... please forgive me for writing with an accent. (g)

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Special thanks to my pards on the Vin Fanfic and Discussion Group and all of the people who have sent me feedback, encouragement and support in the past. Very special thanks to my wonderful friend and beta, Teri and to Kathy for helping to spot the errors.

THIS UNIVERSE IS CLOSED I hope you will respect this. I encourage you to create your own modern universe to play in. Thank you.


Brotherhood, Trust and Faith

Response to the Finish the Story Challenge July 2008

(1479 words)

Patience was a talent Vin had learned in order to survive. Yet as he stared into the flames, his stomach did a slow roll. This time, he didn’t think he could wait.

4:28... 01sec

How the hell could he wait?

The mission had been compromised…the information given to them, wrong… Josiah was injured, but safely in Nathan’s care… Chris wasn’t answering his headset and now the enemy seemed to know their plan… and J.D. couldn’t work out how they were infiltrating Em7’s communication.

Vin was left with no option. “Radio silence. You know what to do.”

Directly across from where the sharpshooter was well hidden from the army of guards, black and grey smoke billowed from the main building of the arm‘s factory. Vin had exited it almost two minutes earlier -- before the explosion. Now, flames climbed into the sky... and Chris was still in there somewhere. He'd been out of contact for almost five minutes.

Vin cursed. Larabee’s last message had been specific. “TWO…complication. Going to deal with it. Continue. If Im not out in time, wait for Step 6, retreat and join the others. Ill join you there.

Those were Vins orders orders from his leader. But something was wrong. Chris had stopped responding to his radio. Immediately after, the enemy seemed to know the team‘s plan. If Chris had been captured, they had his headset. That had to be why J.D. couldn’t track down the hacker.

4:28... 03 secs

ONE, report. Vin had to confirm his theory. The acid in his stomach bubbled. There was no sound over the radio not even static, which meant Chris headset was in good working order -- Chris just wasnt answering.

ONE, respond. The tendrils of anxiety spread. If Chris could, hed answer. Which meant “If you bastards hurt him, you're dead!

Chris had been captured. It was a logical conclusion and if that was the case, Vin had to take command… but he couldn’t. Not if he wanted to go after Chris.

 

4:28... 07 secs

Vin flicked the switch on his headset.

“Suspect they have ONE’s headset. FIVE, take command. Im going after ONE.

Wait. Vin paused a split second. Ezra was telling him to wait?

Im going after ONE, Vin growled, checking his rifle.

Wait for Step 6.

Step six was the second set of explosions and they werent due until 4:31... almost another three minutes. Was Ezra simply trying to follow Chris orders?

The plans changed. Im going after ONE. Chris didnt have three minutes. As if to support this fact, the roof of the burning building Chris had disappeared in, groaned. The rest of you follow…”

TWO, hold your position!

Ezra had to know something he couldnt communicate over the headset.

TWO, confirm. Hold your position.

Vin swallowed.

Enemy guards were pouring out of the building coughing. The flames seemed to be growing with each second. Small explosions and walls crumbling resounded from inside the factory. The doorway was still clear of flames but Vin knew if he waited much longer, he wouldnt be able to get in. Chris time was running out.

FIVE, I have…”

Trust me.

The burning in Vins chest increased. He did trust Ezra. Torn, Vin peered at the building willing Chris to appear.

4:28... 14 secs…15secs…16secs…

The second series of explosions rocked the compound. Vins eyes widened. That was what Ezra had known. Somehow Josiah had been able to set off the charges earlier than planned. Now Vin had cover.

GO!

Vin didnt need further encouragement. He shot across the open area. The guards were running in the opposite direction, away from the chain of explosions that continued around the compound.

Vin entered the building, his rifle directed out in front of him. This was an ammunition’s factory. As soon as the fire reached the ammunition, the explosion would be big and deadly.

Over the sound of the fire and bombs outside, Vin heard ricocheting bullets. He cursed. The fire had already reached the ammo. Abruptly there was a roar. Vin was thrown to the ground. Four more blasts went off in quick succession, rocking the factory to its foundations. The wall on Vin’s left shattered inward. A wave of heat swamped him. The roof above groaned. Plaster dust and smoke rushed at him from all directions. Fire broke out around him. The only clear exit appeared to be the direction Vin had come from, but the flames were spreading quickly.

TWO, get out of there!” Ezra shouted in Vin’s ear.

Vin forced himself onto all fours, oriented himself and leapt to his feet. "ONE!" he yelled over the top of the ringing in his ears and the roaring of the blaze. “SIX, activate ONE’S emergency beeper, NOW,” Vin choked out. The headset beeper was a crisis innovation enabling the team to find an injured member. Today, Vin hoped it would take him to Chris… even if the headset was in the hands of others.

Vin listened. A high-pitched beep cut through the roaring of the fire. Vin ran down the corridor toward it. Without thought or so much as a pause, he crashed straight through the flames blocking his path and continued running, entering a small office. He could barely see, but the beeping was coming from here.

“CHRIS!” The room was filled with thick, choking smoke, but the flames had yet to reach it. “CHRIS!” No reply. Vin stumbled forward. He tripped over something on the ground and ended up on his knees. “Chris!”

Nothing but the roaring of the flames from the corridor and the beeping of the headset answered his desperate cries.

Vin was oblivious to the excruciating heat. He was barely aware of the gagging smoke. He was focused on one task. "Chris!"

Vin reached for what he’d tripped over. It was hard -- a chair. Ropes. Chris had been tied to this.

“Chris!”

Nothing!

Vin clambered to his feet, his lungs starting to ache. His eyes were watering profusely as he floundered forward, his legs striking the desk. He spread his arms feeling for Chris.

There was a gasp to his left. Amongst the thundering and roaring of the fire, Vin heard his name choked out.

Vin?”

“Chris!”

“Wall. Your left,” came the wheezed reply.

Vin made his way around the desk, straining his weeping eyes to see through the impenetrable smoke. He moved left as instructed, found the wall and began patting his way toward the muffled coughing and gasps. Vin’s knees struck something soft.

“Chris!” Vin reached down. Chris was on the floor. Somehow Chris had freed himself from the chair and had been making his way to the window. Vin reached down, located Chris’ arm only to discover Larabee’s feet were still bound. Withdrawing his knife, Vin swooped, slicing the zip-tie in one movement. Then he dragged Chris upright. They only had seconds to get out before the roof caved in on them or they succumbed to the choking smoke.

Vin fingered the window latch. “Locked,“ he yelled. Without a word he and Chris turned, picked up the desk and hurled it at the glass.

Together, they flung themselves through the opening and collapsed on the ground outside, smoke cascading after them. Vin’s lungs began to convulse, desperately trying to drag in oxygen. He raised his face, searching for his partner. Chris was on his side, covered in black soot and coughing uncontrollably.

“Chris,” Vin choked, reaching out to his friend.

Two enemy guards loomed over them. Before Vin could react, the pair toppled, revealing J.D. and Ezra.

“Let’s go,” Ezra shouted as he and J.D. dragged Vin and Chris to their feet and dragged them toward safety.

Behind, the building moaned and then came crashing down. Smoke, flames and rubble now stood where Vin and Chris had been a heartbeat earlier.

Ahead, the Em7 chopper descended. Nathan appeared with Josiah, who was on his feet and travelling under his own steam - thank God.

Vin was dragged aboard, an oxygen mask shoved over his nose and mouth.

“Breathe slowly,” J.D. urged.

Removing the mask, Vin gasped, “Chris?” He could see Nathan tending to the bloody lump on Chris’ forehead. Larabee smiled weakly and gave his partner the thumb’s up signal. Josiah waved from his seat.

Vin was overcome with relief. They’d made it and everyone was okay.

Spotting Ezra at the front of the helicopter, Vin rose on shaky legs.

“…is tending to them now. Ezra out.” Ezra snapped the phone shut, his worried green eyes on Vin.

Vin opened his mouth, but was overcome by a coughing fit.


“Thank you for trusting me,” Ezra stated softly, guiding Vin back into a seat.

Vin smiled easily, offering his hand. Ezra took the proffered fist and their forearms locked together in brotherhood.

“Trust… you… with…” Vin’s lungs spasmed.

Ezra pulled the oxygen mask into place, nodding both understanding and encouragement. Vin shut his eyes.

Rocked by the movement of the chopper, and bathed in the security of total trust and faith in his companions, Vin drifted into an exhausted slumber.

All was well.


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